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Hello guys, welcome to my channel
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and sharing what you think about education abroad.
and today I have a guest - Walker
who is from the United States
and today we're going to discuss motivation letters
this is one of the most important aspects when you apply to university
and I've gone through this process
I wrote 6 motivation letters
because I applied to 6 universities
and I know it plays an amazing role in the application process
We're going to discuss top 5 things you need to consider
when writing a motivation letter.
So Walker, could you please introduce yourself?
I'm American living in Russia
Phd in Asian Relation studies from the University of Pensilvania
We start in America learning about motivation letters
when we're getting ready to go in a camp
My friend in New York said that their daugher who is 11
has had to write her first motivation letter to go into a private school.
As much as we all hate doing it
it's an essential part of life and
it's selling yourself
and showing yourself as individual who's capable of doing something
basic part of American culture
and something that is spread in the application process
around the world and
something that any english-language University will require
and many others
The most important things
about a motivation letter
is that you look at it as being part of the entire package
of your documents which you submit
so when you gather these documets together
you've got your exam scores
for your field
or whatever discipline you're entering into
you've got your diploma
and your grades
and your marks
and then you have this other part
application
and sometimes this letter is attached to
And the most detailed thing about you as individual
is often going to be in this application
where they ask questions like "Why do you want to go here?"
"what experience do you have?""Do you have work experience?"
"what sorts of hobbies do you have?"
"What languages do you speak?"
All of these things are in the application.
Many students make a mistake when they're preparing these letters
as they use the application as the basis for the letter
They end repeting it
repeating half of what they wrote in the letter
what you need to look at is
look first at the whole documents
and imagine that this person in the admission commetee
is looking at you and only
knows you from these documents.
If you imagine yourself as a character
that's only knows from this - what's missing?
what is where about you that is not in this package?
Your voice is missing actually
because you have numbers and diplomas
but you don't have your voice.
Many universities have very detailed application
questions
that are part of the application
and in that case you need to talk about something else
in the letter
Make sure that the letter is something that supliments
the application and doesn't repeat it
so it has new information.
The second thing is really important
you get a picture and it's written precisely
to the audience
that is going to be reading.
a piace of writing
and that the people who are there
who are on this commetee
are going to be attracted by this document
to you
as a person
and this is distinguish to
a lot of where you're going
if you're going into BA program
or you're younger student
they're principally interested in you as a person
and in you as a potential
adult
and so it's very important to talk about your hobbies
show yourself as being a rounded person
that's a common adjective - a well rounded person
but if you're going into Master's or Doctor's program
they're interested to know exactly how you're prepared
and why you're interested in this particular program
in this particular field.