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  • Hello everyone! Sunnyfall here and as  I'm sure you've already read the title,  

  • I suppose I have to jump right in and say that 

  • despite the level of nostalgic fondness many fans have for it

  • Power of Three is a bad arc  the pacing is incredibly slow but it's difficult  

  • The pacing is incredibly slow

  • but it's difficult to tell that sometimes thanks to the complete lack of direction that the arc has

  • being more of a meander around different random events thancohesive plot

  • and consistency of either the dramatic tension, relationships, or character arcs can pretty much be thrown out the window as a possibility

  • Some of this is a build up of several smaller  problems with particular characters or plot points  

  • which i won't get into in this video, but  I'll likely cover many of them in the future.  

  • For now I want to know why the arc as a whole failed.

  • So how did it come out this way?

  • Is there anything we can point to that would explain why The Power of Three is so flawed?

  • Well, while there are a multitude of problems that likely contributepiece,

  • the main factors are the way the series is written, and the vision for this arc in particular.

  • Warriors has a team of editors who give outlines of the books to writers so they can be fleshed out.

  • General ideas or sparks of ideas are thought out for arcs,

  • but it doesn't take much to get the ball rolling

  • which forces writers to essentially fly by the seat of their pants when trying to put  out the next book in an arc.

  • So it's essential for the inspiration to an arc to not just be good but be something a whole plot can be built from.

  • I'm sure it's no secret to most people where I'm going with this.

  • The Power of Three's inspiration was "the fire scene,"

  • about Ashfur confronting Squirrelflight as he threatens to murder her three kits,

  • and then her revealing them to not be her kits to save them.

  • This is a genuinely good scene. Let me be clear about that.

  • It's easily one of the most memorable, quoted moments from the series: one that fans still draw and discuss today.

  • But there are issues with it as an inspiration for a whole arc.

  • Because of this scene, and working backwards from it Vicky Holmes was able to form a clear vision for exactly how Squirrelflight and Leafpool,

  • and by extension Ashfur, Brambleclaw, and Crowfeather  would feel throughout the arc but the arc.

  • But the arc couldn't be from any of those points of view.

  • She needed it to be from the kits' point of view so the shock and impact could be seen firsthand,  

  • and their lives proven a lie. And for this, she  needed to not only figure out who those kits were,  

  • but come up with a plot for them to go  through while they were living in blissful unawareness of the secrets surrounding their birth.  

  • (Which would have to be a pretty long one since she planned for the reveal to be at the end of book five of six.)

  • None of that was helped along by the fire scene.

  • The Erins needed a completely new  idea to make a mini-arc within The Power of Three  

  • and for this...they turned to superpowers.

  • The Erins presumably considered "children with superpowers"  a weighty enough premise to carry the ark until the fire scene came up,

  • and under this light they only had to answer the question of what power each cat had to keep up the dramatic tension.  

  • For Jaypaw they evidently found this the easiest

  • His power isn't well defined, but none of them are  

  • and he's already using it and learning  about the prophecy in the first book.  

  • For Lionblaze I'm sure they figured out early  on, though not necessarily in the first book,

  • that he would have some sort of fighting power.

  • But his fighting abilities and possible invincibility are contradicted over and over from book to book and even within some books.

  • In Eclipse, his entire arc centered around his being afraid of his power and the bloodlust making him turn out like Tigerstar.

  • But it's difficult to sympathize when we don't know what his power really is,

  • or even if he's just a normal warrior who happens to have a good build.

  • But the worst came for Hollyleaf.

  • Vicky mentioned recently that she was able to learn the personalities of Jayfeather and Lionblaze in the early storytelling phases,

  • and from there what powers they would have came out easily.

  • It's no wonder then that none of the Erins could think of a power for Hollyleaf,

  • who was written very inconsistently even through to her death.

  • She was a complex character but none of the writers or editors ever pinned down exactly how complex, or what her traits and values were.

  • So, for many fansshe didn't even become a compelling character until she murdered someone:

  • a very strong character moment that all the Erins could much more easily focus on when they wrote for her later.  

  • Now she had regret and that could be understood.

  • So instead of deciding on her powers and characterization early in the arc,

  • very late in the arc it was decided that Hollyleaf didn't have a power

  • But that would be a big, dramatic moment  for her, enough to carry the arc on its own,  

  • and the end of Power of Three was already  laid out for the fire scene and its fallout.  

  • We did get some Hollyleaf drama at the end of the arc,

  • but it never got to be exclusively focused on her not having a power.

  • She never even realized that until she thought, alongside her siblings,  

  • that none of them were part of the three since Firestar might not really have been their kin

  • The things tormenting her were still the code, her bloodline, and now, being a murderer.

  • The powers didn't enter into it.

  • Even with Jayfeather and Lionblaze, who the powers were roughly set for,  

  • how they were invented works in direct opposition to the reader's expectations, set up both by past precedent and the ark's writing.

  • The way the characters tend to discuss it, as well as the way it's eventually used and used up by the battle with the Dark Forest,

  • suggests that the powers they were born with were made for a specific purpose

  • And that would make sense.

  • Cats in the Warriors universe don't normally have magic powers like this.

  • But even in the one prior case we had: Leafpaw and Squirrelpaw having their sister telepathy,

  • It was for a particular purpose: so the traveling cats had a link back to the clans at home.

  • And without any fanfare, when the quest was done, the powers went away.

  • A reader would expect these powered  protagonists to function in the same manner

  • So if you give us a cat with vaguely mixed  telepathy, empathy, and dreamwalking,

  • another cat with vaguely defined fighting abilities, or maybe indestructible powers?

  • and a third cat who thinks she has a power but doesn't,

  • what is the problem these powers are supposed to solve?

  • Whatever the answer may be, that isn't a question that was ever asked in The Power of Three

  • and by the time Omen of the Stars was saddled with this problem...  

  • well they still didn't have much of an answer

  • but they decided there would have to be a battle against the Dark Forest to justify the scale.

  • Power of Three on its own didn't have a story about these powers being used for anything,  

  • which is why it seemed acceptable for them to only even learn about the powers between the third and fourth books.

  • But these cats lives also weren't  spent primarily focused on being someone's kits,  

  • as the Erins seemed to be based on the fire  scene inspiration.

  • They were focused on just growing up in Thunderclan, going through a series of mostly unrelated adventures

  • and eventually navigating the notion that they do, or do not have superpowers.

  • So both the original foundation for the story: the fire scene and the injected plot of the powers have no bearing on the plot the story ultimately puts forward for the majority of the arc.

  • You may not be convinced as of yet so I'll go through a rundown of the plot relevant  events in the arc.

  • I'll preface this with the fact that there are moments I'm leaving out,

  • but I have included everything that is relevant in any way, character or plot-wise, outside the plot of the exact book it is in.

  • Book One: The Sight

  • Our protagonists are born. They  get into trouble even as kits

  • and Jaykit/paw and Hollykit/paw do a little  dance for the next 15 chapters to find out who will be the ark's next medicine cat.

  • Hollypaw takes it for a while but she's not good at it and Jaypaw is so they switch.

  • Lionpaw really likes a Windclan cat named Heatherpaw, who he gets to meet in chapter 10 and chapter 21.

  • These two interactions have cemented his undying love.  

  • Jaypaw finds out about the prophecy

  • You may notice i didn't include most of the ending.

  • Well that's because this book doesn't end on a plot point but instead a competition between apprentices of different clans known as the daylight gathering.

  • Hollypaw wins about against Heatherpaw off-screen and

  • Jaypaw saves Lionpaw and Breezepaw from a collapsing badger den

  • but none of this is ever mentioned again after this book,

  • even in Omen of the Stars when Breezepelt really should remember the cat he was threatening to murder saved his life.

  • But as expected the family dynamics are only mentioned passively or in small moments of foreshadowing

  • because these three kits are supposed to be ignorant to the main plot.

  • Thankfully Jaypaw did get to find out about the prophecy, and he was using his power all book so at least that plot can get started!  

  • Book Two: Dark River

  • Hollypaw thinks Lionpaw isn't loyal because Heatherpaw

  • Lionpaw and Heatherpaw start meeting at night in the tunnels under their territories. (Yes that is the order of events.)

  • Lionpaw starts training with Tigerstar  in the Dark Forest.

  • Jaypaw finds a stick. This is important. We swear.

  • Windclan kits go missing so our trio meet Heatherpaw and Breezepaw in the tunnels  

  • and with the help of Fallen Leaves, a ghost in the tunnels and Rock, a cat summoned by that stick, they get the kits out.

  • Lionpaw breaks up with Heatherpaw.

  • There is a large plot running through this book of Riverclan being driven out by twolegs and Hollypaw disobeying the warrior code to find out what's wrong and stop it.

  • Considering she was, and will be again, so intent on following the warrior code to the letter, this level of hypocrisy really should be important.

  • But unfortunately in the future they act as if it didn't even happen.

  • As I said before Hollypaw doesn't get the luxury of a consistent character arc.

  • but this book is also completely devoid of powers,

  • with the exception of Jaypaw seeing Rock and Fallen Leaves which could very well just be a consequence of his beingmedicine cat rather than a use of his power.

  • Book Three: Outcast

  • Tribe cats come to take Stormfur and Brook back.

  • Thunderclan decides to send them  with interest so Squirrelflight, Brambleclaw, our protagonist trio, Tawnypelt, Crowfeather, and Breezepaw come too  

  • Breezepaw is a brat.

  • The clan cats drive out the intruders where Lionpaw finds out he is very good at fighting somehow coming out without a single wound.

  • Jaypaw finally *decides* to tell his siblings about the prophecy.

  • I think it's a pretty standard opinion among Warriors fans to dislike "traveling books" and it's easy to see why

  • because it takes us away from the plot and cast we might care about in the middle of an arc

  • and does little but give us a few character moments that may be important when they do something later.  

  • We finally get some closer interactions with our trio's adoptive parents, and Lionpaw gets to show off his power,

  • but none of this is in a context we care about.

  • Outcast is a very long, boring bookbut magically it provided the best sprinkle of  moments from the family plot and the powers plot, albeit sparingly.

  • Book 4: Eclipse

  • Lionpaw and Hollypaw now already know about the prophecy and go home

  • Lion paw is still training in the dark forest  and wounds gained while there do not go away.  

  • Sol arrives.

  • In a big battle with all four clans, Lionpaw nearly kills some Windclan cats he's angry at.

  • The three talk to Sol a few times, who avoids saying anything concrete and then decides to see Blackstar instead.

  • Blackstar and Shadowclan abandon Starclan and the warrior code  

  • Lionpaw is now bloodthirsty and scared about it.

  • Lionpaw and Hollypaw (and Cinderpaw) become warriors.

  • Plot-wise this is the heaviest book the arc has had so far,

  • and Lionpaw actually gets to start a nice little character arc in it about his power  level.

  • but Sol's arc with Shadowclan has nothing to do with either the family or the powers plots of the arc.

  • More than that, he doesn't even manage to have any consequences to the plot or even the characters by the end of the arc

  • despite being around for all the remaining books, and being brought back in Omen of the Stars.

  • He spends a lot of time with Hollypaw- er, Hollyleaf, but has no more effect than he has on the other two protagonists which is to say not very much.

  • Jaypaw barely gets anything noteworthy to do in this book as well.

  • All he does is have a vision that makes  him, and by extension his siblings and clan, trust Sol.

  • Book Five: Long Shadows

  • Tawnypelt brings her kits to Thunderclan since Shadowclan isn't doing well.

  • Our protagonist trio and Tawnypelt's kits fake a sign from Starclan so Blackstar will revert Shadowclan to normal.

  • Sol is driven out and Tawnypelt goes back.

  • Sol tries to manipulate Hollyleaf.

  • Now, in the middle of a large green-cough bout. Jaypaw uses that stick from the second book to go back in time for five chapters and tell the ancients to go to the mountains  

  • Lionblaze is still scared of his power.

  • Jaypaw cures everyone and becomes a full medicine cat.  

  • The fire scene happens.

  • The three wonder who their parents are and each try to stop ashfur.

  • Spoiler Alert: Hollyleaf killed him.

  • No one tells the real story afterwards.

  • Most people remember this book for the fire scene,

  • but it comes on really suddenly near the end, and for most of the book they're wrapping up the plot from Eclipse

  • and then taking a detour  out of a really big green-cough scare to send Jaypaw into the past for an impromptu romance.  

  • The actual fire scene happens in chapter 22

  • and the entire rest of the plot from Ashfur's threatto each protagonist trying to stop him, to the discovery of the murder,

  • and Jayfeather's musings about him during the vigil takes place in only the last six chapters.

  • They dedicated almost as much time to time travel as they did to the most famous  moment in the arc:

  • the one that they were building up this whole story to make.

  • Lionblaze and Hollyleaf get startlingly little to do in this book,  

  • and after the fire scene any arcs the characters might have had just stops in its tracks.

  • Book Six: Sunrise

  • Lionblaze gets into a fight with Tigerstarand gets injured...Hmmm.

  • Jayfeather spends time trying to discover his real parents.

  • They bring Sol back and lock him up.

  • The three decide this is a great time to talk to him about their parents.

  • Without Sol's help (Mousefur and Starclan just...tell themthey find out who their parents are and leave him for good (but not before letting him escape).

  • Crowfeather rejects his children twice.

  • Hollyleaf tells everyone at the gathering the truth about her and her sibling's parentage

  • then tries to make Leafpool eat deathberries, gives up, and runs into the tunnels.

  • Dovekit and Ivykit are named and Jayfeather realizes one of them is actually the third.

  • I've had to leave quitelot of this book out because ten whole chapters are devoted to the clan tracking down Sol, the cat they think murdered ashfur.

  • It's worth noting we learn in chapter three from midnight that this assumption is untrue.

  • We are aware it's pointless. Jayfeather knows it's pointless. Hollyleaf definitely knows it's pointless. Even Lionblaze isn't especially convinced.

  • But we go through it anyway.

  • Firestar actually tries to speed up the plot a few times by asking Leafpool to see Ashfur in Starclan and ask who killed him.  

  • but she keeps deflecting or outright refusing, presumably because she's covering for Hollyleaf.  

  • The story here is all build up to make Hollyleaf break so we get her scene at the gathering,  

  • an attempted murder of Leafpool and flush her down into the tunnel so we can start up the next arc with a fresh pair of protagonist faces

  • The powers here are regulated to mentions that they might not have them at all,

  • something not unique to any of the siblings.

  • The ending is all about the fallout from the family drama

  • but the first half of this book diverges from both plots to do...nothing other than bring Sol and Purdy back only to have the former leave again.  

  • Over the full arc let's cover what the story  did with each supposed plot.

  • As far as the family reveal squirrelflight and brambleclaw are just average parents for warriors standards,

  • playing a small but important role in their kits lives, shown mostly in the beginning of The Sight and through Outcast.

  • Their parentage doesn't really become important or noteworthy until the end of book five, with the fire scene,

  • and then it's the main reason for the character drama in book six.  

  • For the super powers, Jayfeather is using his as early as the first book, where he learns about the prophecy,

  • but the others don't find out until the space between Outcast and Eclipse  

  • Lionblaze's power then becomes his central  driving force and fear (alongside hating Heathertail)

  • until the fire scene comes and his arc stops short and is never mentioned again

  • Hollyleaf doesn't have a power, but does use having one as a reason she's special until one by one all her reasons for being special come crashing down.

  • But as expected the powers don't amount to much of anything.

  • Jayfeather could have just had an above  average intuition and been a normal medicine cat

  • The medicine cats already have a brand of magic anyway.

  • Lionblaze could have just been strong and reckless,

  • and Hollyleaf could have stuck with the numerous other reasons she had for thinking she was special before learning about the prophecy:

  • being a daughter of brambleclaw squirrelflight, being strict with the warrior code, being a great warrior, etc.

  • She had this hero complex way before she was told about the prophecy.

  • None of these changes would have influenced their character arcs, and none of the plot requires their powers for anything.

  • In fact, if Power of Three really was a story about building up superpowers so that they'd be able to fight the Dark Forest for the following arc,

  • they would have included the scenes where they were told about the prophecy,

  • or maybe an actual scene of Tigerstar convincing Lionpaw to train with him, considering he would be the next arc's main villain.

  • As it is, seemingly essential material like this was time-skipped over,  

  • and I think it's because neither the family  drama nor the superpowers are treated like the main plot of the arc.

  • So if Power of Three is so badly put  together, why do I like it?

  • Why have i dedicated so much time to making a rewrite of it, and Omen of the Stars?

  • Well that is because of what the arc did succeed in doing.

  • The arc's real strength is in being a slice of life story, up until the end.

  • It ended up as something of a mish-mashed mess thanks to throwing in some plot-heavy family drama and unnecessary supernatural elements

  • but because the Erins had to spend so much time learning about their cast, we got to learn about them too,

  • and that doesn't just include the protagonists.

  • Most of the cats in Thunderclan at the time stand out as some of the most interesting in the series,

  • especially when compared to what we have these days with The Broken Code

  • Think about BerrynoseMousewhisker, and Poppyfrost.

  • Each of them have pretty sizable characterizations and are popular with certain parts of the fandom 

  • despite not getting a lot of screen time in comparison with other characters in their generation.

  • Now think about Leafshade, Sorrelstripe, Eaglewing!

  • Did you know Eaglewing has an apprentice named Myrtlepaw?

  • Did you know Eaglewing existed?

  • I won't blame you if you don't.

  • Power of Three wasn't perfect but it did give us a cast to love and dig into.

  • Everywhere you look there are more stories  to be told happening in the background.

  • Poppyfrost not only having to deal with her own near-death, and the death of her sister but the knowledge that her mate loved her sister more, and she was the second choice

  • Mousewhisker has a famous flirtation with a riverclan she-cat, and continues to describe how much he'd like to fish or swim for the rest of the arc.

  • Graystripe and Brambleclaw have to subtly fight over who Firestar will choose as a permanent deputy

  • and Spiderleg draws away from his mate, or perhaps former mate, Daisy, once she has his kits.

  • That's a massive amount of characterization for entirely background plots unrelated to our main characters,

  • especially since many of those cats don't speak much.

  • And it's not a level that could come from, say, the original arc either, since that story moved at such a breakneck speed.

  • The prophecies began often had jumps of three moons or more, between chapters ofsingle book,

  • speeding fireheart along his journey so he could become a good leader by the end.

  • Power of Three is very slow.

  • It takes four times as long for our protagonists to become warriorsand in that time we get to know all our characters and love them.

  • Our main characters are pretty good too.

  • Even when their characterizations are inconsistent,

  • the ranges they show in terms of emotions  and experiences gives us the chance to piece together more interesting characters than someone who consistently expresses only a few traits.

  • It could have been a much better slice of life story if there weren't superpowers at all,

  • and the tone did have to shift pretty rapidly when some maniac named Ashfur threatened to kill them,

  • but, considering the kits were supposed to be blissfully unaware until the reveal,

  • it makes  sense to use that time for...bliss.

  • All this to say, I actually like The Power of Three, but it's more fun to talk about than it is to read.

  • I hope I can change that.

  • And I am well aware that a lot of the superpower elements in this story will conclude with the, arguably even worse arc, Omen of the Stars,

  • but unfortunately, talking about that one will have to wait until i start writing that part of the series.

  • Until then, I will be covering more specific topics than an entire warrior's arc.

  • If there's anything you're specifically interested in, comment below and I'll look into them.

  • Thank you for watching,

  • and always make sure to keep superpowers out of your family drama!

Hello everyone! Sunnyfall here and as  I'm sure you've already read the title,  

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