Callnumbertwodealswithcoherenceandcohesion, whichistheabilityoftheessaytolinkdifferentideastogetherbothat a sentencelevelat a paragraphlevelandatanentireessaylevel.
HowarethesecohesivephrasesusedaretheAretheyusedin a fluidmatter?
Orarethesomewhatmisswordedanddifficulttofollow?
ThethirdcolumnSorry, thefourthcolumnyoucanseeistheLexicalResourcecolumn, andthisdealswiththeabilityofthestudentstouse a varietyofvocabularyandphrasingand a measureofhowaccuratelytheycanuse, uh, howaccuratelytheycandisplaythisskill.
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Now, ifwestartedtheverybottom, ofcourse, 00 is a studentwhodoesnotattendstheiraisles.
Structureis a skillthatcanclearlybeseenbasedonwhetherthestudentsisemployingum, ordisplayingtheirabilitytoseparatetheirideasintovariousparagraphs.
Didthestudentright?
Onelargeparagraph?
Well, thatis a verybigmistake.
Didthestudentright a numberoflittleparagraphs?
Ordidthestudentsright?
Littletitlesaboveeachparagraph?
Theseairalsothingsthatwedon't wanttodoontheexam.
Um, thetaskat a bandthreelevelis a completefailure.
Thestudentdidnotunderstandtheessayquestion.
Theywroteinessayon a topicthatdoesnotrelatetowhattheessayquestionisaskingThiswouldbe.
Thisoneincludesstudentsthatright, a discussionessaywhentheyshouldhavewrittenanargumentessayorstudentsthatpresentedtheirargumentsatthebeginningoftheiressaywhentheywereaskedtoanalyzetheheopinionsofothers.
So, forexample, a studentthatrates, ontheotherhandnowthisis a phrasethatisusedinEnglishtoshowanoppositeortoshowanextremebasedonsomeinformationgivenbeforeAh, studentwritingat a badband.
Fivelevelwillhavenoticeablespellingerrors.
They'resimplesentences.
They'resimplesentencesmightbeaccurate, butanythingthat's a littlebitlongerthan a simplesentencewillbeincoherentandwillbevery, verydifficulttounderstand.
Theexaminerhastothinkforahah, periodoftimetounderstandwhatthestudentistryingtosaynow, thedifferencebetween a fiveand a sixat 1/6 level, thetaskiscompleted.
Sothestudentdidrecognizetheaislesexamquestioncorrectly, andtheyprovided a responsethatisreasonable.
Now, a keytoremember, uh, whenwegoontothebandSevenlevelandthedifferencebetweenadvancedsixandAdvancedsevenisthat a bandsixmayhavesomesmallerrors, butthetheerrorsdonotcompletelyimpedethemeaningfrombeingunderstoodbythereader.
Soifyourememberat a bandfivelevel, whenthereaderreadsthesesentences, whenyourexaminerreadsthesesentencesat a bandfive, theymaynotquiteunderstandwhatyou'retalkingabout.
Sothere's there's enoughmistakeinthesentencetoimpedethemeaningNowat a bandsixlevel, theTheremaybesomemistakesinthesentence, butthemeaningcanstillbeunderstoodbytheExaminer.
Whenyourexaminerreadsit a band, sevenlevelstudentswillrightfrequentlyerrorfreesentences.
Sotherewillbe a numberofsentencesintheessaythatdonothaveanygrammaticalorpunctuationorchoiceofvocabularyerrors.
Theerrorsthatourpresencein a bandsevenlevelorquiteminorandtheyareremote, whichmeansthatthey'rethey'renotverycommon.
They'renotineverysinglesentence.
Okay, movingupto a bandeightlevelnowBandeightwriting.
Themajorityofthesentencesareerrorfree.
The S a reader, uh, maystillbeabletodistinguishthatthewriterofthisessayisnot a nativespeaker, butoverall, thetheessayhasvery, veryminormistakesandveryfewerrorsinchoiceofvocabularyandUmand, ah, choiceofcohesivephrases.
Thetaskisansweredflawlessly.
Sothereis a completeanswer, given a directanswertowhattheessayquestionisaskingandextrainformationordetailsandexamplespresentedsupportswhatisbeingarguedorwhatisbeinganalyzedcompletely.
Thisiswhatconstitutes a bandaidwritinglevelnowgoinguptothebandthateveryonewantstoachieve.
Slipsandslipsarebasicallysmallmistakesthatevenhappento a nativeEnglishspeaker.
So, forexample, perhaps a verysmall, um, spellingmistakeor a, uh, maybetheoneareawhere a commaismissing.
There's a very, very, veryfewmistakesatthislevelNow.
Thedifferencebetween a Bandnineand a Bandeightisthatwhenreading a band's nine, theExaminerwouldhavedifficultydistinguishingthiswritinglevelfromanessaywrittenby a nativeEnglishspeaker.
SothelevelofEnglishwrittenat a vannineiscomparabletothatwrittenby a nativeEnglishspeaker.