Name: エッセイの整理の仕方（ザ・マシーン (How to Organize Your Essay (The Machine))
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Hey. This is Mr. Sato and I'm going to help you organize your essay.

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Organization in an essay is actually pretty easy once you learn it. You may be writing

an essay about a work of literature, a research paper for your social studies class, or answering

a writing prompt on a standardized test; argument or explanatory;

it doesn't matter. They all require the same basic organization.

Let's make a quick distinction between those two kinds of essays. An argument essay, sometimes

called a persuasive essay, contains a thesis; it's an opinion that you'll be supporting with evidence.

On the other hand, an explanatory essay, sometimes called expository or informative, uses a topic

sentence; it's a factual topic that you'll be explaining more about in your essay.

Yes, these two things are different, a thesis is an opinion while a topic sentence is factual;

but the organization around them is pretty much the same. But be sure you know what kind

OK, now. Look at this diagram of what I like to call "The Machine." It's pretty simple.

The triangle on the top represents the beginning. It will open with your hook, and end with

your thesis or topic sentence, represented by this little gold star here.

I drew a star because the thesis (in an argument essay) or topic sentence (which is what you

use in an explanatory essay) is kind of the star of the show. It is the single most important

sentence in the entire essay because everything else in the essay is there to serve that sentence.

The blocks in the middle are usually called the body of the essay. That's where you support

your thesis or topic sentence with evidence and arguments. The word "proof" is a little

strong, but it might help you to think that what you're doing in the middle section of

an argument or persuasive essay is proving your thesis. In an informative or explanatory

essay, you would say you're developing your topic in more detail with examples and relevant

The triangle at the bottom is the end, your conclusion. That's where you remind your reader

what the point of the whole essay has been, and explain why it matters.

Think of this structure as a machine. You know how on a car, all the basic parts work

together to achieve a single purpose? to drive you safely from point A to point B? That's

what the tires are for, that's what the brakes and the drive shaft are for, that's what all

the parts in the engine are for. They all exist and work together to make one thing

This structure is like that. The hook smoothly introduces your thesis. The body of your essay

supports or "proves" your thesis. Your conclusion restates your thesis and extends it a step

further to provoke a thought or to show how that idea can be applied in real life.

And that's basically it. But let's now look at the individual parts of this machine a

In the first paragraph, begin with a hook, or attention-getting intro. I made another

video on exactly this topic, so I encourage you to check that out. You want to say something

interesting here that makes your reader want to read on, and of course, it should relate

to whatever it is you're writing about. It's wide up here, because the introduction is

usually more general, broader. At the bottom of the triangle, it's narrow because that's

where you narrow it down to your specific point: your thesis or topic sentence, represented

And since everything else in the essay serves this single statement, make sure you don't

mess this up. Look carefully at the prompt or your assignment and make sure your thesis

or topic sentence is clearly and specifically addressing the assigned topic. If the prompt

is to argue for or against deep fried candy bars in school lunches, then your thesis must

do one of those two things: say that you support deep-fried candy bars in school lunches, or

that you oppose them. It must be a clear answer to the prompt. If you don't do that, your

essay will be vague at best, or off-topic at worst. All your evidence will stand around

The body, or middle, is the longest part of your essay. This is where you support or "prove"

your thesis. So, you think that candy bars in school lunches is a bad idea? Here's where

you say why. You should have multiple reasons to support your position, and each of those

reasons gets its own separate paragraph. The classic "5-paragraph essay" requires exactly

three supporting paragraphs, like a stool with three legs, but many essays require more.

A few, like a letter to the editor, could require fewer.

In some essays, like a compare/contrast essay, you might describe the first thing in one

paragraph and the second thing in the next paragraph, then analyze the differences in

the next one. Or maybe you could describe similarities between the two things here,

and two differences here and here. But no matter how many supporting paragraphs you

have, or even what's in them, they all do the same job. They must support your thesis.

If something isn't helping you prove the thesis, take it out.

So, this is how it works. If this was a trial, the defendant's plea (not guilty) would be

the thesis, and the evidence to prove his or her innocence would be the body of the

essay. This middle section should be the longest part of your essay.

An explanatory essay is very similar. Rather than proving an assertion or claim, you explore

different aspects of your topic in each of the body paragraphs. Let's say your essay

is about South African history. One paragraph might be about the colonial period, a second

might be about 20th century conflicts under apartheid, and a third might be about its

present political situation. Three legs of a stool. The body of the explanatory essay

develops different aspects of your topic.

Another subtopic is the counterclaim and your rebuttal, but I'll put that in a separate

At the end of your essay, you will remind your reader what point you're trying to make,

so you will paraphrase your thesis. Paraphrase. Don't use the exact words you used in the

Restating your thesis is like you're closing the deal. You're sort of saying, "So, after

all this, you can see that my thesis is true, right?"

And then you add what I call the "broader significance." That isn't a term you'll find

in a textbook; it's what I call it. But it's where you explain why this idea matters, why

it's significant. It's where you take your conclusion one step farther. It's where you

Using that candy bar example, in your conclusion, you might want to talk about how schools are

places where kids can learn how to be adults, so schools have a responsibility to promote

healthy lifestyles. You're explaining why this idea matters.

You broaden your perspective, like a camera pulling back to show the landscape, the bigger

picture. That's why I drew another triangle here. This time you begin narrow and specific

(you oppose deep-fried candy bars in school lunches), and broaden out to a wider, more

general statement (schools have a responsibility to their students). It's just like the first

paragraph, but upside down; this time it starts narrow and ends broad, the opposite of your

A second way to end your essay is to, again, paraphrase your thesis, then give a call-to-action.

Tell your reader directly what he or she should do about all this new information you've given

them. You might say, "So write to the school board and tell them that deep-fried candy

bars have no place in our school cafeteria." You're telling the reader what he or she can

do, what action to take, if he or she now shares your opinion.

Before we finish, there's one more thing. The paragraph transition is a big topic, but

briefly, look at the diagram again. See how these parts aren't actually touching one another?