Okay, Sothefirsttiptoimproveyourwritingisdon't usetext, speak, textspeakbythat I mean, forexample, like B r B or L O l orthosekindsofwordsthewordsthatyouuseontheInternetlike S andNasserintextmessageswithyourfriends.
Thoseveryshortlikeslangwords T t y l orEllaMae.
Oh, arethosesortsofacronyms?
Donotusethoseinyourformalwriting.
Ifyouarewriting a letter, a businessemail, whatever.
Donotusethose.
Theonlyonethatyoucanusein a businessemail.
Sonotin a letterofrecommendation, notin a formalletter, buttheonlythingyoucanuse.
Thatsortoftextspeakish, eyestheocracy, M F Y I, whichmeansforyourinformation, youcanuse F Fly I in a mailtoyourcolleaguesinanemailtoyourcolleaguesoryourcoworkers.
Butusuallyit's withsomebodyyouhave a goodrelationshipwith.
Youcansay F Y I Inthosecases, othertextsspeakotheracronymslikethat.
Butifyou'rewritingandyouhavesometimetothinkaboutwhatyou'rewriting, insteadofusing a wordthat's commonlikedeliciousandjustattachingverylikethiscakeisverydelicious.
What's a differentword?
Thatmeansverydelicious.
Socan I replaceveryanddeliciouswithonedifferentword, likescrumptious, forexample, thiscakeisscrumptious.
Scrumptiousmeansverydelicious.
It's onlyoneword, soifyoucandothis, ifyouapply a a wordthatmeansthesamethingasveryorreallyplusanotherword.
If I wanttointroducemyscrumptiouscakeandthen I wanttomoveonto a descriptionofthestorethatsellsthatcake, I mightuse a transitionphraseorsomekindofsequencephrasetohelpmedothat.
Soifinparagraph A, I'm talkingaboutmyscrumptiouscakeandhowmuch I enjoyeditinthechocolateflavorsandtheamazingfrosting, I coulduse a transitionphrase.
WeseethisinChildren's booksand, like I say, insortofinformalarticlesonline, thirdpersonstylewritingisusinghe, sheandcharacternameslikehewenttothestore.
So I'm justgoingtotalkabouttwotensesherereallypresentstentsandpasttensesowecanusethepresenttenseonandthepresentcontinuoustendsreallytoexplain a storyortotell a storylikeit's actuallyhappening.
Soif I saylike I gotothestore, I see a friendofmineshe's buyingmilk.
Forexample, if I usethepresenttenseand I usedthepresentcontinuoustense, itsoundslikethelistener.
Then, ifyou'rewritingabout a generalfact, youshouldprobablyusepresenttense.
Butifyouwanttocreatelike a fictionstory, forexample, andyouwantyourreadertoexperiencethestoryandkindoffeelenthusiasticorenergeticaboutyourstory, present, tenseandmaybecontinuoustensewithpresentwouldbe a betterchoice.
Thisisespeciallyimportantifyouarewritingacademicpapersorifyouarewritingsomethingyou'regoingtopublishin, like a journalormaybeeven a magazine.
Usingreferencesmeansyouareusingreferences, readingreferencesandwritingaboutthemandincludingwhat's called a citationinyourwriting.
Soyou'retaking a pieceofsomethingthatsomeoneelsehaswritten, puttingitinquotationmarks, perhapsdependingonthewayyouchoosetosightitandthenadding a referencelistattheendofyourdocumenttoshowwhichdocumentsyoureferenced.