And I wouldliketopersonallythankthemfortheirbraveryinsendingrecordingsoftheirvoicesforustoanalyzetodate.
So I hopeeverybodycankeepinmindthatthisisonlysupposedtobe a helpfullesson.
I hopethatnobodyfeelsembarrassedregardingthecommentsthatwemakeaboutthem, becausewe'reallherejusttolearnandimproveourlanguageskillsandultimately, ourmarkontheIslesexamination.
Beforewebegin, I shouldstateclearlythat I amnotanIslesexaminer, noram I associatedwiththeBritishCouncil, I dpAustralianortheEssoGroupattheUniversityofCambridge.
Sothefollowingarejustmycommentsbasedonmyexperienceasanislesinstructorandas a nativespeakerofEnglish.
Sonow, withoutfurtherado, let's getstarted.
Uh, I shouldexplainhow I wentaboutgaugingthevariouslevelsofthesespeakers, and I didsousingtheEiltsspeakingbanddescriptorschart.
ThisisthepublicversionthatismadeavailablefromtheaislesdotorGEwebsite, andyoucandownloaditforyourselfthere, and I hopeyoudoanduseit.
Ah, whilewatchingthisvideo.
Now, let's justzoominhereand I'llexplain a littlebitabouthowthischartworks.
Thefirstisfluencyandcoherence, whichisbasically a measureofhowfluentandhow, um, howeasilyunderstoodthestudentiswhenspeakingEnglish.
ThesecondcolumnisLexicalResources, whichreferstothewordchoiceand a choiceofphrasesthatthespeakerusestoexpressthemselvesandtospeakaboutthedifferenttopicsthattheydo.
Soinassessingthesestudents, I trytostickascloselytothischurchas I possiblycould.
And I hopethatthefollowingis a fairlyaccuraterepresentationofwhatthesestudentswhatMarkthesestudentswouldachieveontheexamination, allsixstudentsrespondedtothesamecuecardanddelivered a monologuethatwasnottoexceedtwominutesinlength.
Andthekeyoccurredthat I postedtomyblawgandthatthestudentsrespondedtoIsthisdescribe a publicplacethatyoulike?
Uh, shementionedsomethingpopularforjogging, andthen a word.
I thinkit's asinkitesurfing, but I I'm notsurethatmighthavebeen a slightmisuseofthatword, too.
I couldn't quitemakethatout.
Andah, andthentherewastheoneofthereasons I likespendingtimeonthisspeech.
A splendidviewonthesea.
Soagain, weunderstandwhatwhatthispersonissaying, butthisshouldbeoneofthereasons I likespendingtimeonthisbeachisithas a splendidviewoftheseajusttoclarifyit a littlebitthere.
Butlike I said, though, coherencewas, uhwasquitegood.
Despite, youknow, thesesmallmistakes.
Now, lookingatthebandchart, I canseeveryclearlythatthisstudent's pronunciationisisabout a sixorslightlyhigher.
Uh, and I'm lookingat, youknow, ifyoulookinthiswordshassixwehavecangenerallybeunderstoodthroughout, thoughmispronunciationofinjuredindividualwordsorsoundsreducesclarityattimes.
And I thinkthatthat's quite a fittingdescriptionforthisstudent's speaking.
Soforpronunciation, thatwouldberoughly a sixorperhaps a littlebithigher.
Whatotherthingthat I mostlikeTheboardisproduced a panoramicviews.
ThewordsoftheSydneyandothernearbyiconiccharactersofthisresearchisOkay, so, youknow, basically, um, thestudentintheiremailtome, theytheyalsomentionedthattheywerespeakingin a lowvoice, which I thinkreallymakesitdifficultto.
So I thinkthat, youknow, coherenceisthatisthereallythebigthingthere.
Now, ifwetalkfor a bitaboutgrammar, um, I thinkthatthedifficultythatthelistenerhasanunderstandingthisspeakerisNomeorduetotheirpoorpronunciationthanduetotheirgrammarorlexicalresourcesbecause, youknow, when I wentbackand I listened a fewtimestothistothisspeakerthere.
Ifyoulistenvery, veryclosely, theyuse a numberofofyouknow, fairlyaccuratewordsintheirlexicalresourceastheyasthedeliverthere, Um, they'remonologue, andtherewere a numberofinstanceswheretheirsentences, youknow, we'refairlydramaticallyaccuratetoo.
So I thinkthatthattheseareasarenotreallythatbigof a problem.
But I justthinkthat, youknow, theclaritywithwhichthispersonspeaksneedstoimprove.
Okay, soandanotherthingjustregardingtheirlexicalresources, Thestudent, youknow, used a fewimpressivewordslikeiconicwhentheyweretalkingaboutcertainthingsthatyoucanseeinSydney.
So I thoughtthatwasthatwasinterestingalso a panoramic.
Butunfortunately I thinkthepronunciationwas a littlebitdifficultthere.
So I thinkthatthisstudentwouldprobablygetaround a fiveoverallintherespeaking, butyouknowaswellthestudentwasspeakingin a verylowvoice.
Nowlet's gotothethirdrecording, whichisalsofromIndia, and I'llplaythatforyou.
Nowitiswell, I wouldliketostrike, Doyou a publicplacethat I liketovisitoften, AndthatplaceisknownasSalamPar, andthisis a beautifulparkinthecenterofthecity, anditislocatedataround a distanceoffparticularmetersfrommyhouse, andittakesmearound 30 minutes, 40 minutestoreachtherebymyownvehicle, and I gotheremostofthetimewithmyfamily, and I gotheremostlyonthebeacons.
Butsometimes I liketogoonthevictorsif I I canaffordtofind a timeduringtheweekdays.
Butthatislessoftenand I gotherejusttorelaxmyself, too.
ThefreshBecausetheparkisverybeautifullybuilt, theentranceoftheparkislike a castle, andithasmanygoodthingstoattractChildrenandpeopleofotherrichgroups, liketherearemanyamusementrightsandmydreamsandotherkindsofffun, funthingsforpeopleofallages.
Andthere's a waterparkinthecenterthatbuckandwhat I likemostaboutthisplaceisthecommontosittingatmosphereonbeautifullybeautifulelectionofftheflowersandthepark.
It's reallywellmaintainedbythegovernment, andyoucansee a lotofpeoplecomingthereintheeveningtime.
And I thinkthatisthemostattractivethingaboutthisplace, thatyouneverfeelalonewheneveryougothere.
I liketogotherewithmyfamily, butsometimes I gotherewithmyfriends, too.
Sooverall, I thinkthisstudent's speakingisisprettygoodinmanyways.
So, um, basicallythelistener, I canunderstandeverymainpointthatthespeakeristalkingabout.
There's, youknow, they'respeakingat a kindof a naturalandcomfortablespeed.
So I thinkthatreallyhelpswiththefluandseeingcoherenceoftheoverallrecording.
So I thinkthat's that's oneareawherethewherethestudentisisisstrong.
Nowthelexicalresourcesarealsoprettygood.
I'm sureyounoticed, thoughtherewassomerepetitionincertainareassothatthestudentssaid, Youknow, when I gothere, I gotherewithmyfamily.
I goontheweekends, I gotheretorelax.
Youknow, therewas a lotofgo, go, gosothatthatwaskindof, uhthatwaskindofrepetitive.
Thestudentalsousesthewordandquite a bitsoandandthenthis.
Thisthisandthis.
Thisthisend.
Andthat's a habitthatthestudents, I'm surecaneasilycorrect.
Nowlet's talk a bitaboutthegrammar.
Sotherewerecertainsentences.
I'm sureyoupickedonuponsomeofthemtoo.
Uh, wherethegrammar, Youknow, ithurtsthemeaning a littlebit.
Makes a little a littlebitmoredifficultforustounderstandthem.
So, forexample, what I likemostofallthisplaceisthecalmWhen I thinkwhattheymeantwaswhat I meant.
What I likemostofallaboutthisplaceisthecalm.
Andthenwhateverthecalmnatureofitsorsomething, or, forexample, youcansee a lotofpeoplecomingthereintheeveningtime.
And, youknow, a commonmistakethatstudentsmakeisistheuseofcomeandtheuseofgosooftenwhenweusethewordcome, we'retalkingabout a placethatweareinatthemoment s.
So I thinkthatthisstudentwouldprobablybebettertodescribethisusinggo.
So, uh, soyoucansee a lotofpeoplegoingthereintheeveningtime, becausewhenshewasdoingtherecording, shewasn't I don't thinkshewassittinginthemiddleofthepark.
Youknow, typically, whenweuseevening, wedon't followitwithtimesoyoucansee a lotofpeoplegoingthereintheevening.
Anothercomment I wanttomakeisthatstudentsoftenusethephraseyoucansee a lotofpeopleoryoucansee a lotofthingsand, um, oftenwecanjustreplacethiswithsomethinglikethereareSothereare a lotofpeoplewhogothereintheevening.
So, youknow, don't don't beshytodothisbecausesometimeswhenweuse, youcansee a lotof, uh, itjustsounds a littlebitawkward.
I'm notsure.
Maybeifthat's somethingthat's that's a phrasethat's commonlyusedinthisperson's nativelanguage.
ButButmaybe, youknow, substitutingthisfortherearewouldbe a littlebitlessawkward s o.
Ifwetalkaboutthepronunciation.
Umsothestudent, someofthestudentssentencessound a littlebitlikequestions, andoftenpeoplefromwithinandbackgroundswill, uh, youknowwhattheendoftheirsentenceis?
Theirtonewillgoup a littlebit.
And, youknow, thatcansound a littlebitconfusingto a nativespeakerbecauseitoftensortofimplies, like a questionofsomekind.
SoSo, forexample, thatthestudentssaid, I feelcalmwhen I gothereinthecenterofthecity.
Youknow, ifwesaythatoursentenceslikethis, itdoesn't soundverynative, I guess, isthebestword.
So a waytofixthisis, youknow, tothinkaboutEnglishasasinlike, a stair.
Soyou'regoingdownthestairsasyouspeak.
So I feelcalmwhen I gothereinthecenterofthecity, youknow, attheendofthesentence.
Sowe'rekindofgoingdownthestairsandthenwhen?
Ifwe'regoingtoask a question, thenweyouknow, wewouldourtonewouldgouporififwe're, youknow, connectingtwoideastogetherwithitwith a conjunction.
So I willgothere, or I willstayheresoyoucanhearmegoingupinthemiddleandthenandthencomingdownattheend.
Butoverall, though I thoughtthepronunciationreallywasn't thatbad.
Amusementridesandsomething I couldn't pickuponthatanyways.
Overall, I wouldimaginethisstudentwouldget a sixor 6.5 onthereexam, Uh, andyou'llseethatintheaislespandescriptorschart.
There's a partthatmentionsmaymakefrequentmistakeswithcomplexstructures, thoughtheserarelycausecomprehensionproblems, and I thinkthatthatsentenceisveryfittingofthisstudent's response.
So, youknow, wedon't youknow, it's notthatwecan't understandthem.
Heislibraries, especiallythelibrary, whichislocatedwithinfiveminuteswalkfromthehouseandwasitwasbuilt 20 about 20 to 25 yearsagowhenmyfamilymovedtothecity.
I wasinElementarySchoolInstituteandthen, andthishasbeenmyfavoriteplacesincethen.
I usuallygotherewhen I havetostudyEnglishreadingandwritingfortheexamination I R.
Andthere's this.
There's a smallstudyroomthere, andit's veryquiet, andsoit's veryconvenientformetoconcentrateonmystudyandwork.
UnlikeOughta, municipallibraries, thislibraryprovidesiswith a rangeof, umAdvancedService's, includingInternetconnectionviaWiFi.
So I alwaysbringmylaptopthereandconnectedtotheInternetandtrysearchingontheweb.
Oh, searchingtheweb.
Thisisoneofthereasons I likethisplaceverymuch.
Okay, So, uh, listeningtothisstudent, I thinkyoucanclearlyhearthattheyarequitefluent.
Andthetonethattheyusewhenthey'respeakingindicatesthatperhapstheyhaveinteractedwithnativespeakersforquite a periodoftime.
So, uh, intermsofthefluencyandcoherencethatyouseeontheonthebandindicatorchart, thisstudentlooksasthoughtheywouldplace a roughlyaneight, whichisquitehigh.
Now, onething I wanttopointoutisthatthisstudentseparateshisspeechintodifferenttopics, andheusescohesiontolinkthemtogether, which I thinkis a signthathisspeakingisatanotherlevelcomparedwiththespeakersthatweheardbefore.
So, uh, youknow, when I finishtalkingaboutfluency, I'llexpand a bitonwhat I meanbyhisuseofcohesion.
Hispaceisverygood.
He's nottoofast.
He's nottooslow.
Hetakesveryhealthypauses.
Uh, thereisnorealhesitationinhisspeaking.
Theonlyhesitationthatisthereisverynaturalthatthekindofhesitationthat a nativespeakerwouldhaveisthey'retryingtogathertheirideasanddeliver a message.
I mentionedbeforethatweweregonnatalkaboutcohesion.
Sotherewasonepartinhisspeakingwherehesaid I wasan I wasanelementary, stupidschoolstudents.
Then I wasanelementaryschoolstudentThenandthenthewordyouknow, theuseofthewordthenindicatesthathe's linkingbacktoanideathathebroughtupin a sentencebeforeit.
Anditgives, youknow, itgivesthewholepiecekindoffeelinglikeit's likeit's workingtogetherasopposedto a numberofofjustsortofstart, stopsortofsentences.
Sohe's usingtheselittlecohesiveraisestokindofmakehisspeechmuchmorefluent, and I thinkthatitcomesacrossquiteeffectively.
Soallthewordsthatyouhearinhisresponsewouldbewordsthatyouknow a nativeEnglishspeakerwouldusewhentheyweretalkingaboutthesametopic.
So I thinkthatthat's somethingelsethatneedstoberememberedwhenwetalkaboutlexicalresourcesisthathe's using, um, youknow, uh, appropriatewordingtotalkaboutthesetopics.
Eachlocationisquitebeneficialformebecauseit's just 20 minutesonfoodfrommyhouse.
I mustgothereonweekendsorjust a tenantattackanytimewhen I wanttoskipthis, uh, citiesstressandwanttobreatheinfreshair I, uhThereareseveralreasonswhy I likethisplace.
Firstofall, I amanavidbroodwroteherandtheonlysoundthathasheardthereis a birthstoneThesecond, Thesecondisthattheatmosphereistherequitecalmanddisplaysdazzlesmewithitsunspooledbeautyonandoffcourse.
Thesnortreasonisthat I likethepicturesqueandunpollutedtoriverthereandthewaterjustcallsuitedmymindonDDE.
Ofcourse, I likethisplaceandenjoywithcityneedregularrebecauseoftranquility, peaceandquietthere.
And I likethejoyofnatureonandoffcourse.
Isthere a marriagealso a uniquefeature?
A mealwhichisjust, I don't know, 32 yearsthere, Uh, anditmakesmefeelthat I'm notinmyhometownsomewhereelseandinanothertime, Soit's a little.
And, umand I thinkthatthat's a That's a signthat, youknow, thestudenthascreatedsomebadhabitsforthemselves.
So I hopethatyouknowthatthepointsthat I'm gonnashareherestudentkindof, youknow, takesthatintoconsiderationandtriestobreaksomeofthosehabitsthatthey'vecreated.
So I wouldimagineforfluencythatthestudentwouldscoresomewherearound a seven, perhapsperhaps a 6.5.
I hadtogobackandlistenagaintotokindofpinpointexactlywhattheyweresayingthere, butunspoiledinpicturesquewordnicelittleadditionstotheirspeaking, therewere a coupleofproblemswithmotels.
So, forexample, thestudentssaidatonepointyouhaveonLeegothereonfoot, whichisyouknow, Miss, itdoesn't reallymakeanysensetoseeitthatway.
So I don't thinkthatthestudent I wastryingtosaythatsomebodyisforcingthemtogotothetothepark.
Sothewordyouknowthewordmustishasbeenusedincorrectlyherewewouldsay, I liketogototheparkontheweekendandinthesamesentence, thestudentssaid, Skip, I wanttoskipthiscitystressandhere's skiphasbeenusedincorrectly.
Wewouldprobablysay, I wanttotake a breakfromthestressofthecity.
So a couplesmalllexicalresourcesthere.
Nowlet's talkaboutgrammar.
I feltthestudentsgrammar.
AccordingtoourfilesbandDescriptorschartisbetween a sixand a seven, sotheyhavemanyerrorfreesentences.
Buttherearestillquite a fewsentencesintheresponsethataregrammaticallyincorrect.
So, forexample, thestudentssaid I enjoyedvisitingitregularlybecauseoftranquility, peaceandquietthere.
Thisis a personfromVietnam, theplacethat I likeverymuch.
Isthereourparknearmyhouse?
I offerandgotothisparkontheweekendinordertorelieve, inordertolive, nottooverlessondhe t o r.
Getawayfromthecontraction.
Thenoisepollutionofftheyearofthecivilizationandopeneveryearth I pickgointotheparkisalso a goodwayformetomeettheforeignpeople, especiallytheEnglishladies, becausebecauseinmyareathetourismisapparentlydevelopedSarahgointotheparkisnotonly a goodwayformetorelax, getawayfromthecivilization, butalsotoourimage, myinternationalrelationships, andleavethatup, Master Q Onwhat I likefromthis, ourplaceistheiratmosphereofthisplaceandtheirscenery.
Beautifulscenery.
Okay, esoNow, ifwestartwithjusttalkingaboutthestudentsoverallfluency, I thinkthatyoucouldtellfromtherecordingthatthatfluencyis a weakareaforthestudents.
Therewasanerroritwith a plural, a swellwhenthestudenttalkedabout I wanttodevelopmyspeakingskill.
Weshouldbesaying I wanttodevelopmyspeakingskills, so I wouldthinkthatthisstudentwouldplacesomewherebetween a fiveand a sixwiththisresponsesothattheypresent a numberoftraitsthatareverysimilarto a five.
Buttheyalsohave a fewtradesthatarethatareuptowardsthesixthlevel.
So I wouldimaginethatwith a responselikethis, thestudentcouldexpecttogetabout a 5.5 astheirmark.