So, forexample, youknow, evenifwewerewriting a letter, that's not a complaintletter, but a letterthatisperhapscomplimentingsomebodyorthinkingsomebodyWemightchangethistoallowmetoelaborateonwhy I wassoimpressedwithyourcompany's service.
Allowmetoelaborateonwhygroupsledmetoelaborateonwhyandthenhoweveryouwanttofinishit, allowmetoelaborateonwhy I feelyouneedtoimproveorallowmetoelaborateonwhy I I feelthiswayaboutyourcompany.
Sotodaywehaveallowedmetoelaborateonwhy I'm soperturbedonwhy I amsoupset.
Um, andwemight, youknow, wecanmakeit a littlebitmorerealisticandjustdemonstratesomeofourwritingabilitytoourourexaminer.
Maybewecouldsaysomethingalongthelinesof I amwhere, ummaybethatyouknow, wehavereadsomewherethatthatthisairportis a rushthatthey, youknow, themaybethecityistryingtobuildthisairportquickly.
Solet's justsharesomethinglike I amawareyouare.
Get a rushtwo, uh, completetheproject, butthechoice.
Youyouhavemade, uh, tohaveyourteamworkallnight.
Everynightis a littleinconsiderate.
Okay, let's justreviewthatsentencethere.
I amawareyouarein a rushtocompletetheproject, butthechoiceyouhavemadetohaveyourteamworkallnighteverynightis a littleinconsiderate.
UmOkay, Now, letmebe.
Wecouldeven, youknow, takethis a bitfurtherandsaythatperhapsthisareais a familyarea.
Becauseifyougetintoyourexaminationandyou'reaskedtowrite a letter, thatletterofcomplaintor a letterexpressingsomesomeangeraboutsomething, thesekindsofraisesairperfectohavestored a ratestoredawayinyourmemory, andthenyoucanjustpullthemoutasyouneedthemontheexamination.
So I amexpectingimmediateremedialactiontobetakenwithyourteam.
Okay, Solet's readthelettertogetherfromthetop, and I thinkyou'llseethatthethreeparagraphsworkwelltogether.
Theyexpressthestoryandtheyalsoarewrittenin a tonethatmakesitcleartoanybodyreadingtheletterthatwearenothappywiththissituationandthatwewantimmediatechangetowhomitmayconcern.
I amwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwiththeconstructionworkbeingcarriedoutforthenewairportinmyarea.
Allowmetoelaborateonwhy I amsoperturbed.
Yousee, followingthecommencementoftheprojectlastmonth, theresidentsofthisareahavehadtoputupwithconstructionrelatednoise 24 hours a day.
I amawareyouarein a rushtocompletetheproject.
Butthechoiceyouhavemadetohaveyourteamworkallnighteverynightis a littleinconsiderate.
Thisareaishometo a largenumberoffamiliesand I cantellyouthey'reallaggravatedbythesituation.
I amexpectingimmediateremedialactiontobetakenwithyourteam, thepeoplelivinginthisareaand I havealreadydecidedthatifmajorchangesarenotmadebeforetheendoftheweek, we'regoingtopursuelegalactionanticipatingpromptresults.
Right.
Okay.
So I, uh I hopethatlessonwashelpfulregardinghowtowrite a letterwiththe A toneofdissatisfaction.