Name: IELTSディスカッションエッセイの書き方（その4/5 (IELTS discussion essay writing (part 4 of 5))
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Okay, now moving on to supporting paragraph two.

Put in another skeleton supporting paragraph two folds the same pattern as supporting paragraph one.

The only difference is that we're talking about the seconds point of view, which is our refute point of view.

Now, if we just do a little review, it's actually just a reminder for me refutes.

So we were disagreeing, and we're using the point.

The U E has many industries that contributes.

Economy is not only dependent on oil, it's supported by a number of different industries.

Thus, if the U E runs out, if Abou Dobby runs out of oil, it's okay.

Will be upheld by these other industries.

That's what we're basically going to say.

So, uh, we might want to use a transition word because we're going from point of view number 12 point of view number two.

So something like on the other hands, many would, uh, many argue that, um, that Abou Dhabi's oil reserves hell not the only industry surgeons that Abby does.

Oil reserve is not the only industry upholding the U.

Um, for example, industries such as tourism and construction will see have gained a very strong foothold, uh, in the Emirates economy and can, uh, chain just you This thes industries can be expected two.

Support the e economy in the absence of oil.

So our first they were stating the second point of view.

On the other hand, many argue that Abu Dhabi's oil reserve is not the only industry upholding the U.

For example, industries such as tourism and construction have gained a very strong foothold in the Emirates economy.

Uh, okay, the double check, my punctuation Emirates economy.

Thus, these industries can be expected to support the economy in the absence of oil.

Okay, we might even want to stick in here, uh, foothold in the immense economy over the past 15 years.

Thus, these industries can be expected to support the U economy in the absence of oil.

Um, so now the last sentence, we want to just, uh, say that we understand why people support this point of view as well.

So, after analyzing thes fax, it is clear why many support um, many support this claim.

Okay, so at this point, we have three paragraphs.

We have a first supporting paragraph, and we have a second supporting paragraph.

And the interesting thing to remember is that at no point have we given our point of view, we've simply supported the points of view of other people.

 Now, in this last paragraph, we're going to give our point of view and a small summary and, um, basically a small prediction of recommendation. 