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  • Okay, now moving on to supporting paragraph two.

  • Put in another skeleton supporting paragraph two folds the same pattern as supporting paragraph one.

  • The only difference is that we're talking about the seconds point of view, which is our refute point of view.

  • Now, if we just do a little review, it's actually just a reminder for me refutes.

  • So we were disagreeing, and we're using the point.

  • The U E has many industries that contributes.

  • Okay, so the U.

  • S.

  • Economy is not only dependent on oil, it's supported by a number of different industries.

  • Thus, if the U E runs out, if Abou Dobby runs out of oil, it's okay.

  • The U.

  • S.

  • Will be upheld by these other industries.

  • That's what we're basically going to say.

  • Okay, now, So let's take away this.

  • So, uh, we might want to use a transition word because we're going from point of view number 12 point of view number two.

  • So something like on the other hands, many would, uh, many argue that, um, that Abou Dhabi's oil reserves hell not the only industry surgeons that Abby does.

  • Oil reserve is not the only industry upholding the U.

  • A.

  • e economy.

  • Um, for example, industries such as tourism and construction will see have gained a very strong foothold, uh, in the Emirates economy and can, uh, chain just you This thes industries can be expected two.

  • Support the e economy in the absence of oil.

  • Every go.

  • Okay, taking it from the top.

  • So our first they were stating the second point of view.

  • On the other hand, many argue that Abu Dhabi's oil reserve is not the only industry upholding the U.

  • A.

  • E economy.

  • For example, industries such as tourism and construction have gained a very strong foothold in the Emirates economy.

  • Uh, okay, the double check, my punctuation Emirates economy.

  • Thus, these industries can be expected to support the economy in the absence of oil.

  • Okay, we might even want to stick in here, uh, foothold in the immense economy over the past 15 years.

  • Thus, these industries can be expected to support the U economy in the absence of oil.

  • Um, so now the last sentence, we want to just, uh, say that we understand why people support this point of view as well.

  • So, after analyzing thes fax, it is clear why many support um, many support this claim.

  • Okay, so at this point, we have three paragraphs.

  • We have an introduction.

  • We have a first supporting paragraph, and we have a second supporting paragraph.

  • And the interesting thing to remember is that at no point have we given our point of view, we've simply supported the points of view of other people.

  • Now, in this last paragraph, we're going to give our point of view and a small summary and, um, basically a small prediction of recommendation.

Okay, now moving on to supporting paragraph two.

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IELTSディスカッションエッセイの書き方(その4/5 (IELTS discussion essay writing (part 4 of 5))

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    林宜悉 に公開 2021 年 01 月 14 日
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