So these the two points of view, the one in paragraph one and the one in Paragraph two, and the next thing we want to do is state our point of view.

So which one we agree with?

Do we refute the statements or do we support this statement?

So this is where we say our point of view.

Finally, we include a prediction or a recommendation, and I think in this essay we're going to give a prediction, which is basically a guess for what the future holds.

Based on what we support now reading through this essay, I think that, uh, that most people would probably support thes seconds point of view.

And so that's what we'll stick to when we write our concluding paragraph.

So let's get started.

Okay, So the first statement is basically a summary of the two supporting paragraphs, the two points of view, so we might write something like four reasons related to history and recent developments.

Uh, the issue of economic stability in the U e.

Uh without the support of Abou Dhabi's Will is supported and refuted by many.

I'm just looking at.

That's a really long since, for reasons related to history and recent de developments, the issue of economic stability in the U.

E.

Without the support of Abu Dhabi's oil is supported and refuted by many.

Okay, we'll keep it.

And now in this next sentence, we want to state our point of view.

So we might start with something like however so however, even though people are supporting refuting this, we're going to say one that were that were in supportive.

So, however, after analyzing thes two points of view, it is clear that the they will say something about historical on dhe changes.

Historical conditions in the Emirates have changed.

So what was true before where the entire Emirates was dependent on Abu Dhabi oil?

Well, that's not true anymore.

Things have changed.

Okay, now we're setting up our point of, you know, our next our point of you will probably be we want to state our point of view very, very clearly.

So the basic question was sort of keep jumping around.

But the basic question beginning was If Abou Dobby runs out of oil, EU economy will collapse.

That we want to state very, very clearly whether we support or refute this, we refute.

So thus the arguments that the U A e economy would fall apart without the support of Abou Dhabi's will can not be supported.

Okay, so we're just clearly stating that our opinion is in disagreement with this statement.

Now the last part.

We want to give some sort of prediction for the future.

And so we probably want to say something along the lines of we don't ever expect there to be a scenario where Abu Dhabi runs out of oil and the entire U A economy collapses.

So we we might actually probably attach this together.

So thus the arguments that the U.

A.

E economy would fall apart without the support of Abu Dhabi is oil cannot be supported and is expected to never be realized, which is a nice way of saying to never come true.

Okay, now, so that's the conclusion of the essay.

Let's read it together.

For reasons related to history and recent developments, the issue of economic stability in the U.

A.

E.

Without the support of Abby Dhabi's oil is supported and refuted by many.

However, after analyzing these two points of view, it is clear that the historical conditions in the Emirates have changed.

Thus, the argument that the U E.

Economy would fall apart without the support of Abu Dhabi soil cannot be supported and is expected to never be realised.

Now we just said, supported twice in the same sentence, which is unattractive.

So we could say without the support of Albert double oil cannot.

Um oh, this change this one without the help of Abu Dhabi soil.

Okay, now, so that's the essay as a whole.

So if we take it from the beginning And of course, if this is on an exam or any SC you're handing in two, you're institution.

You definitely don't wanna have these small titles now from the top.

Traditionally, the U.

S economy has been completely reliant on oil.

Within the past 15 years, however, its economy has diversified.

Some believe that the U economy will collapse of Abu Dhabi, runs out of oil and some refute this thes points of you will be discussed in this order.

It is believed by some that If Abby Dobby runs out of oil, the U E economy will fall apart.

An idea that supports this is the historical facts that the U.

E economy has been almost completely dependent on its capitols oil reserves.

It can be argued that this history will remain true in the future.

Thus, it is clear why some people gravitate towards this point of view on the other hands.

Many argued that Abu Dhabi's oil reserve is not the only industry upholding the U.

E economy.

For example, industries such as tourism and construction have gained a very strong foothold in the Emirates economy over the past 15 years.

Thus, these industries can be expected to support the U.

E economy in the absence of oil.

After analyzing these fax, it is clear why many support this claim for reasons related to history.

In recent developments, the issue of economic stability in the U.

E.

Without the support of Abu Dhabi soil is supported and refuted by many.

And once again, we used to support twice is, um, well say, agreed with and refuted by many.

However, after analyzing these two points of view, it is clear that the historical conditions in the Emirates have changed.

That's the argument that the U E economy would fall apart without the help of ABA Daba soil cannot be supported and is expected to never be realized.

Okay, I feel this essay is very strong, and we've used a number of linking words which in English is absolutely critical if you're writing an essay.

Thus, however, for reasons related to, uh on the other hands, for example again, thus, after analyzing these fax, so all of these phrases help link the sentences together.

One more thing I'd like to point out before concluding is that in no place did we include our opinion in the 1st 3 paragraphs.

So the 1st 3 paragraphs that we do not see her opinion at all as well.

When we're writing an essay, it's important to remember not to use, uh, personal pronouns related to, uh, to ourselves in our opinions.

So we do not want to say things like, I think or we think or our opinion is this is not correct.

You cannot use this in an essay.

Okay, so that concludes our lesson on how to write a discussion essay.

Thank you for listening.