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Hello! My name is Jack McDermott.
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i am a graduate of Harvard University, and a managing editor, here at Top Admit Consulting.
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Last year nearly three-quarters of a million students from arond the globe applied to colleges and universitles here in the United Stated.
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The admissions process is becoming even more competitive.
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Right now, admissions officers are being inundated with well-qualified applicants.
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Students that have impressive G.P.A.'s, very good class rankings, and outstanding test scores.
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But ultimately, the most important part of the applications process is the admissions essay.
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This is the story of you.
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It needs to be more than just a collection of grammatically correct sentences.
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That's important, of course, but it won't gain you admission to the college of your choice.
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You need to create a dynamic, inspiring narrative about who you are as a person. Your background.
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What makes you unique, what you have accomplished and what you intend to accomplish.
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Ultimately, the admissions essay is your argument.
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Your argument to the committee as to why they should admit you instead of the thousands of other well qualified applicants.
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Top Admit Consulting can help you with that.
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We employ professional editors who themselves have been through the process.
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Editors who themselves have graduated from Harvard, Yale, Columbia, Stanford.
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We know the admissions process, and that the admissions committees wants to see, and that they do not want to see.
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We can help transform your writing into an interesting narrative that helps you stand out from the thousands of other applicants.
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I would encourage you to contact us at out website
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www.topadmit.com
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You can learn about the services that we provide.
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not just help with admissions essays, but also help with scholarship applications, recommendations or resumes.
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Ultimately, I encourage you to contact one of our professionals
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so we can tell you how we can improve your chances of gaining admission to the college of your choice.