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Here is today's challenge Some think that cultural traditions may be

destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions

aimed at tourists. Others say it is the only way to save these

traditions. Discuss both ideas & give your opinion

Your challenge here is to decide if tourism destroy or save cultures

It is undeniable that a trip to an unfamiliar land

far away from your everyday life is a fantastic experience,

but we cannot ignore its negative impact on the local cultures.

First, let's talk about cultures- why are they destroyed?

Firstly, as cultural traditions are commercialized, some dishonest business practices appear.

For example, souvenirs, handicrafts, and local specialties are often fake & overpriced

Besides, in the peak tourist seasons, the quiet, peaceful land becomes an overcrowded

and noisy market because there are too many visitors.

Traveling to a remote area means escaping from the busy city.

What's the meaning of the trip if you see the same hustle and bustle?

In addition, tourists, (unintentionally, though) pose a threat

to the local cultures b/c the youngsters are easily attracted to Western styles.

For example, they might want to wear baggy clothes

Instead of their traditional ones.

However, surprisingly, tourism does save cultures as well.

Why do I say that? First thing, MONEY .

Oh my God. Who doesn't like money? Tourists bring an incredible and stable income

to the host country. Thanks to this financial resource,

historical buildings are renovated, traditional festivals are kept and held every

year, beautiful nature is preserved in good condition.

Artist & artisans also benefit from this great income

which enables them to continue their art work. In other words,

without financial support, they would lose inspiration

and the traditional arts would die off Finally, Tourism is an awesome way to promote

the host country. When travelers get home, they share their

unforgettable experience. Therefore the unique traditions and cultures

are spread to the whole world.

So, to ensure that cultural traditions are only saved. Here is the suggestion

The authorities should find the right balance between tourism development & cultural preservation.

Specifically, they should build effective strategies

to strengthen tourism as well as protect distinct traditions & cultures

I must say, the authorities really play an important role here.

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